Beautiful Writing Series: Enhancing Student Perceptions of the Value of Writing


Panelists Claire Martini and Molly Joyce at the Beautiful Writing Series, September 29, 2016.

Students often question the value of writing in “the real world.” To enhance student understanding that writing is a valuable skill in every field, the Interdisciplinary Writing Program (IWP) launched the Beautiful Writing Series (BWS) in the Fall 2015 semester.

Now in its third semester, the BWS brings professionals from a variety of disciplines to talk to students and faculty about the type of writing they do, who their audiences are, and considerations they must keep in  mind as they write.

To date, the BWS has hosted two creative writers and professional teachers, a doctor, a science editor, a sales manager, and a volunteer outreach coordinator. You can read more about each speaker’s contribution to the Beautiful Writing Series on the IWP’s Symposiums & Events page.

The IWP strongly encourages all teachers to attend – and to offer extra credit to students for attending – the panels. The final panel of 2016 will be October 20th from 3:30-4:30pm in the Health & Learning Center (HLC) Room 2403, and will feature a journalist and a representative of the Grand Canyon Trust.

Never Pay for Anything: Demystifying Cline’s Resources

By: Claire Seel

Cline’s homepage:

Did you know that Cline can save you time, money, and hassle? It can.

Here we are in grad school, doing research, relying on online databases and Cline Library’s Research Librarians to get us through. To ease our way through our studies, the librarians have teamed up with the Graduate College and launched a series of workshops aimed at grad students to ensure that we make full use of what they have on offer.

The first workshop for Fall 2016 was held on September 23rd in the multimedia room. Brittany Blanchard, Research Librarian for the educational fields, was the facilitator.

Which brings us to an important point: if you need in-person help, you’ll save time by going straight to your subject librarian. These experts have specific knowledge of the databases most likely to be useful to you in your search, and will have tips and tricks at their fingertips to streamline your research. The services of the subject librarians are available to all students at NAU, those on the Flagstaff Mountain Campus as well as extended campuses and online. 

The workshop kicked off with a review of the library’s physical resources, including study spaces, carrels and lockers, computers and technology, and hours

The handiest button in the world!

The website’s Ask Us! button is on every page, and gives you instant access to the library’s live chat, email, phone number, and FAQ page.

Another tip: Brittany recommends that grad students go to NAU’s website and connect our computers to the university’s VPN (virtual private network). This essentially tricks our computers into thinking we’re working on campus, which can make accessing articles less of a hassle.

The workshop moved from physical resources to database searching. This section was a surface overview of the multiple databases, journals, and library sharing resources available to us via the Cline. A grad student can search databases by title or subject, with subject being the recommended search because the subject librarians have gone through the databases and narrowed them down to the best bets, or, rather, those databases that they consider most likely to be useful.

If you would like to learn more, the librarians encourage you to go to the Research page and make an appointment. They will walk you through time-saving search techniques, ways to broaden searches and ways to save your searches and get the program to generate citations from articles you’ve saved.

One thing that was repeated throughout the workshop was to never pay for anything: Articles, books, software. Chances are excellent that whatever you need, Cline either has it or can get it. So always go through them first and save yourself money.

Finally, don’t forget that coming up on October 12th they’ll be digging deeper into their offerings with a workshop on how to get started with a Literature Review. These workshops are given in coordination with the Grad College. You can learn more about what they are offering on their Events Calendar, and you can RSVP for the literature review here:

Headstorms and Outlines

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A student enjoying the snow

By: Claire Seel

Northern Arizona University has a robust community of international students. Coming from countries as diverse as China, Kuwait, and Brazil, these students are here in Flagstaff for the same reason domestic students are here: to get a degree, to improve their post-educational job prospects, to impress their families, to grow as individuals. Kathy McKeiver, Coordinator for the Center for International Education, reminds us that international students are going through all the growing pains that domestic students are going through, but are also much further from home and adjusting to a new culture and a new language.

An important facet of that adjustment is absorbing the expectations of American academic writing. With this in mind, two University Writing Commons (UWC) Writing Assistants held a workshop for the CIE 100 class on September 8, 2016. Maria (Masha) Kostromitina and Dannae Patterson planned a lesson focused on outlining and brainstorming an essay while cultivating a sense of community with small group and large group discussion, leading students to reflect on their international experience and to better understand the application of outlining for a writing prompt.

In their write-up of the experience, Masha and Dannae noted that “Our experience was extremely positive. We did not anticipate their eagerness to learn about outlining. We also were very pleased with their participation in small group and large group discussion. “ Kathy agreed, saying that she was quite impressed with the level of student participation in the discussion, because in her experience, international students are hesitant to engage.

Kathy notes that international students face a number of challenges unique to language learners, with the most serious being that everything takes an international student longer to accomplish: note-taking, listening comprehension, reading, and writing. But especially reading. Kathy said that any instructor wishing to learn more can look into a faculty development series in which her colleagues are participating.

Kathy’s favorite teachable moment was when the Writing Assistants brought up the word “brainstorming” without thinking to explain what was meant by ‘brainstorming.’ She said that Dannae’s use of body language to demonstrate bringing ideas out of the head and into the room was quite useful for the students. One student wrote in the follow-up to Kathy that learning about ‘headstorming’ had been a highlight of the session.

How successful was the workshop? Would they do it again? Absolutely. Kathy is pleased that the students are aware of the resources of the UWC and were introduced to it in such a positive, interactive fashion, while Masha and Dannae say that, “We really enjoyed working with a population that we adore and hope to do this again soon.”

Bitzer and Writing Workshop Design

For all the writing any student has to do in school, it is remarkable that writing is still such a difficult task. At any age or level of education, writing is an ordeal, an exhausting endeavor at making yourself sound clever, or well read, or at least like you know what you’re talking about. It’s rough stuff but writing, like a bad breakup or an awful movie, is something for which it helps to have friends around. That’s why the University Writing Commons exists: to work through the hardest parts of writing. And that’s also why the Writing Workshop Team exists: to help in all the ways the Commons cannot and to be around when you’re trudging through another paper; we’re there to trudge with you.

If you were ever seized by the desire to read rhetorical theory, then Lloyd Bitzer’s “The Rhetorical Situation” is where you should begin; it’s a quick read and from it you may learn everything you need to be a persuasive writer and a persuasive person. Bitzer outlines the Rhetorical Situation itself as a situation with an exigence, an audience, and constraints. The exigence is your purpose in the situation, what you want to happen; the audience is the person or group that can help you accomplish your purpose; the constraints are what hold you back from meeting your goal. The rhetorical situation is is the foundation of the workshops we have been hosting for three years; here is our rhetorical situation.

Exigence: We want to help students write and we want to do that in a way the UWC cannot. Instead of going over one student’s writing assignment, we have opted out of working with assignments at all and teach writing skills instead. The UWC’s work is specific; it helps students immediately, it helps their grade one assignment at a time. With the workshops, our goal is to work on the big picture, to improve the skills students apply to all their writing assignments.

Pictured above: hard work, basically the same thing as writing.

Audience: Students! All of them because they all write. Something we hear from students a lot is that their area of study will not require writing after school. These are the students that benefit most from the impossibility of time travel because their future-selves would strike down their youthful bodies for not learning that emailing is as much a writing process as an essay, that lab reports are not magically completed by lab-fairies, that memos, flyers, Craigslist ads, personal blogs, sappy love notes are all writing, and writing takes work.

Constraints: Writing, as I’ve noted, is pretty hard work and who really wants to exhaust themselves with something they don’t think will be relevant outside of school. I put about as little effort as possible in my high school math classes because I knew I wouldn’t be taking integrals in the future past the final exam. That’s the attitude we’re working against, the feeling that writing is irrelevant. Our largest constraint is that students don’t want to work on their writing and that is a shame because they’re just delaying the inevitable or they’re promising themselves disappointment when a potential employer doesn’t hire them because they can’t write.

It has been our goal to work with students to help them improve their writing, to help them foster lasting writing skills that will help them after college. We have hosted workshops for three years and each year we get a little better at finding ways to work with student writing. The workshop team will continue to work with students, we’ll keep trying to convince people that writing is necessary outside a classroom, and we’ll be around for anyone who needs help writing for a while.

Justin Kanzler is mostly adequate. That’s how he explains the tagline for his personal blog He is a senior at Northern Arizona University. He lives with a cat.

How the Rhetorical Situation Applies To Literary Magazines


In The Rhetorical Situation, Lloyd Bitzer suggests that when analyzing a speech or essay, the reader must go further than just understanding the setting of the piece. Instead, it is imperative to recognize the full context, how the writer is responding to this context, and how this advances the creation of rhetoric. A rhetorical situation has three primary components, the exigence, the audience, and the constraints. For example, I am an English major and in my creative nonfiction class we are expected to submit at least one essay to a literary magazine. The essay I am going to submit is a brief composition that centers around my sister’s battle with anorexia. So the exigence, or issue at hand, is eating disorders and how they affected my family. The exigence effects why I chose to write the essay and why I think it is important for people to read. My audience is multifaceted, I need to impress my professor to get a good grade, I need to

The essay I am going to submit is a brief composition that centers around my sister’s battle with anorexia. So the exigence, or issue at hand, is eating disorders and how they affected my family. The exigence effects why I chose to write the essay and why I think it is important for people to read. My audience is multifaceted, I need to impress my professor to get a good grade, I need to Screen Shot 2016-03-28 at 11.42.02 AMappeal to the literary magazine if I hope to be published, and my essay needs to draw in my peers because they are the type of people who would read the magazine. My teacher wants me to write a braided essay with many elements, my peers mostly just want to be entertained. I want to send my essay to magazines like Tin House and Prairie Margins because magazines like this actively seek out undergraduate unpublished authors, as well as frequently publish creative nonfiction. All of these elements have to be taken into account when editing my essay. Finally, constraints affect the variety and gravity of information I will provide to the audience.
Screen Shot 2016-03-28 at 11.56.13 AMWhile the essay is personal, I want to also reach out and relate to others who are affected by eating disorders. However, I do not want to come off as preachy or generalize those suffering from disorders and these are examples of constraints. While working in the University Writing Commons I hear the writing assistants reinforce these concepts to students all the time, especially to undergrads like myself who are grappling with recognizing and implementing rhetorical devices for the first time. The goal writing assistants strive towards is to fix more than just surface formatting and grammatical issues. Instead, they delve into the framework of the paper, who it is written for, how it can appeal to them, and how effective students can make a short assignment.

Ashley House is a student at Northern Arizona University. This is her first semester as a Student Assistant at the University Writing Commons.


Can You Fix All My Grammar Mistakes?


By: Erica Thompson

Some days in the Writing Commons go a little something like this:

“Hello, how are you doing today?” I ask my first student of the day as she sits down in the chair next to me.

“Fine,” the student says with an air of skepticism, or maybe it is apprehension that a friend will walk by and see them getting help on their writing.

“What are we working on today?” I ask so they know I am in this with them. Together we will find a way to make their writing even better.

As I wait for their response I think, Please, don’t say grammar. Please, don’t say grammar. Please don’t say grammar, with a smile plastered on my face.

“I was hoping you could fix all my grammar errors,” the sweet student says already looking through the status updates they missed on their phone since they sat down.

Shoot. Keep smiling, I tell myself.

“Of course we can work on grammar together. Is there anything in particular that you think we could start with? Like subject-verb agreement or article usage?”

“Huh? I just want you to read my paper and fix my grammar, isn’t that what you do here?”

“I can help you with grammar, but I was hoping you could tell me specifically what you were struggling with so we could address it and you would know how to fix it in the future on your own.”

“My professor told me I would get extra credit for coming here and having you fix my paper. Can’t you just read my paper and fix my grammar?”

The writing assistant turned copy editor are the Writing Commons experiences I dread the most. The days when I am relegated to a copy editor and not asked to teach or assist are not days I look forward to.

Even though that is how some of my Writing Commons experiences go, it is not the norm. My favorite Writing Common experiences are when a student comes in and asks for help with something that seriously matters to them.

I have had the opportunity to work on resumes, capstone projects, cover letters, and personal poetry projects. I love when a student seeks assistance to improve something they have worked hard on and are proud of. They have taken the time to polish their words and craft something meaningful that will either aid them in their class or in practical, real world, out of college experiences.

Of course, during the course of working with students on the things they are passionate about their grammar is usually addressed. Working and reading through their work with a writing assistant shines a light on some of the errors they have overlooked. They are relieved to fix their work, and usually are capable of fixing the errors on their own.

I love when a student leaves confident in their work and confident in themselves. The best of Writing Commons is when I work with a student for thirty minutes and help them find that they already were a good writer. Good writers can become even better when someone sits down alongside them.

Writing as a Collaborative Effort

 Writing as a Collaborative Effort

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By: Stephanie Moret

My favorite part about working at the University Writing Commons as an assistant is that I have the opportunity to work with students from every discipline, and with that, I have the chance to witness how writing pertains to each specific field. When I first began working as a writing assistant this semester, I assumed that it was my role as the assistant to help save the struggling students. Yet, through my work, I’ve discovered that this isn’t the case: it is the writing assistant’s job to work with the student. Instead of viewing the attendees as individuals who need saving, I’ve learned that it is our job as assistants to learn from the student, and help the student learn too—it is a collaborative effort. Through my work this semester at the UWC, I’ve come to view each session as a process of learning for both the consultant and the student.

In one of the first meetings that I had this semester at the UWC, I was surprised to find that the student who showed up to work with me wasn’t a struggling student with an assignment from a class. Instead, he decided to come to the writing commons to gain feedbacimagesk on a grade appeal that he was writing to the university. The student came to me frustrated about a teacher that—in his opinion—had wrongfully given him a bad grade.  It was at this very moment that I realized, as his assistant, it wasn’t possible to have all the answers—I had no idea how to write an appeal to the university. We spent our session working together to understand how an appeal should look and sound, and who it should be sent to. I shared my expertise as a rhetoric student: I showed him that when writing any type of letter, the writer has to consider the rhetorical situation by appealing to the audience, and by being straightforward in the purpose of the letter (Bitzer). After I explained the necessity of rhetoric, he shared his expertise as a business student. We discovered together that the best way to set-up the appeal would be to address it as a business letter, and to write it as a persuasive and respectful argument paper. My work with the student convinced me that writing assistants can’t possibly have all the answers. Instead, we have to work as a team with the students in order to understand the deeper meaning of their writing task.

My experience with this student also taught me that it is empowering for people to learn through collaboration rather than solely earning information from one teacher who has all the answers. It is more effective to have students learn by coming together to share ideas, and acquire knowledge as a team (Gee 32). While I still recognize that I am the teacher in each session, I want the students to not only learn from me but to also teach me. That way our session doesn’t turn into a lecture that I lead, but instead, a collaborative effort to achieve learning on both ends.

While it is my teaching strategy to aim for collaborative learning, I understand that at times it is easier to say than do. There are days when I show up at the UWC, tired, hungry, and worn-out from my day as an English 105 teacher and a full-time graduate student. These are the days when I recognize that it would be easier to grab the student’s paper “fix” it, hand it back, and send the student on their way; it is easier to pretend that I hold all the knowledge about writing than it is to humble myself and learn with the student through collaboration. On days when I’m feeling stressed, I have to take a minute and remind myself of the UWC’s mission: we work as assistants to learn, teach, and help inspire students to gain confidence in their writing through collaboration.

Works Cited:

Bitzer, Lloyd. “The Rhetorical Situation.” Philosphy and Rhetoric.  (1968): 1-14. Web. 26 Sep. 2015.

Gee, James. “What is Literacy.” Teaching and Learning 2. (1987): 3-11. Print.